Patrick O'Donnell has gathered links to aritcles and commentary, including:
Kevin Jon Heller, at Opinio Juris. “The DoJ White Paper’s Fatal International Law Flaw — Organization”
Kevin Jon Heller, at Opinio Juris. “The DoJ White Paper’s Confused Approach to Imminence (and Capture)”
Benjamin Wittes and Susan Hennessey, Lawfare. “Just Calm Down About that DOJ White Paper”
Benjamin Wittes and Susan Hennessey, Lawfare."A Brief Word in Response to Jack"
Steve Vladeck, Lawfare. "What's Really Wrong with the Targeted Killing White Paper."
Deborah Pearlstein, Opinio Juris. "White Paper"
Jens David Ohlin, LieberCode. "Thoughts on the White Paper"
Jeffrey Rosen, The New Republic. “Drone Strike Out: The Obama administration’s drone strike memo is unconstitutional”
Brad Wendel, Legal Ethics Forum. “Here We Go Again - The Obama Administration and Bad Legal Advice”
Marko Milanovic, EJIL: Talk! "A Few Brief Thoughts on the Department of Justice White Paper”
Jonathan Hafetz, Balkinization. "“The Controversy over DOJ’s Targeted Killing White Paper”
Eric Posner, Slate. “President Obama Can Do Anything He Wants To Fight Terrorism. (That’s the lesson of the leaked drone memo."
Rick Pildes, Lawfare. “Confusion about ‘Imminence’ and Targeted Killings”
Mike Dorf, Dorf on Law. “Does Anyone Have Standing to Challenge the Kill List Procedures?”